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My semi-relevant to this forum Haiku poem

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blades lock and shields smash
Larpers fall beneath my feet
davie kills from behind



*bows*
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nice Haiku m8 well thought out :D


Jolly good show sir :!:

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thanks dude,
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Nice one..

(though I do believe the last line has 6 instead of 5 ehm whatyamacallitsinEnglish. Nut it is so nice that I should not comment on that.)

a trampled larper..
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omg you're right!
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and you call yourself the Haiku master Tut Tut

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Tcho! It doesn't even have a kigo! :twisted:


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It's out of season this time of year, but I understand cherry blossom to be very popular in some parts.
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Medicus Matt wrote:Tcho! It doesn't even have a kigo! :twisted:


Winter chills the brain.
Monkeyboy thinks he's clever
But proves himself wrong.

I know it doesnt have a kigo!

jeez, some people are so overly critical, I cant do anything right :(
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Little red monkey, acting so fidgety

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WorkMonkey wrote:
jeez, some people are so overly critical, I cant do anything right :(
You're new to reenactment, aren't you? :twisted:
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I don't know, what counts as new?
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Slim, beardless...easily upset :twisted:
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Medicus Matt wrote:Slim, beardless...easily upset :twisted:
No I wont be your beardless youth.
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WorkMonkey wrote:
Medicus Matt wrote:Slim, beardless...easily upset :twisted:
No I wont be your beardless youth.
In that case, I shall have you dipped in garum and thrown to the Romans.
"I never said that I was here to help."

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Oh well, ok since its you...
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Little red monkey, acting so fidgety

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