A poem entitled..... The Red Arrows

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A poem entitled..... The Red Arrows

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They're good
But they're not as good as sparrows......
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They're good
But they're not as good as sparrows......
They're bad
But not as bad as arrows........

They're mad
But not as mad as hatters.........
They're sad
But not as sad as satters..........
Miel (pronounced "Mile")
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Post by panzywanzytanzerman »

That's plagiarism that is!!!! or is it extensionism?
Anyway - it's far too wordy - The original said it all

You could have wrote one about Swallows....

Swallows
They're boring
Forever soaring

See? It's economy... Any stupid Wordsworth can write a sonnet....
Homer wrote The Simpsons
Epics are terminally long....
No friend Miel - in, out, leave the picture in their mind......... let them colour it in...... :wink:

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Oil paints
Beautifully.....
Miel (pronounced "Mile")
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Post by Guest »

NOW
You're getting the hang of it! :wink:

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Guest,

It's only taste.
The rest is waste .....

To choose to write with words quite bright and long enough to couple,
Will only prove that, left to choose, our language can be supple.

If you like !
Miel (pronounced "Mile")
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It's only taste
The rest is waist
http://www.blood.co.uk. You get biscuits and everything.
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A waist of time ?
Maybe,
said the Cat,
Who came back.
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Post by Wim-Jaap »

The cat is dead, but from the hat, came another cat, who said, I'm Red,
But Red was blue and so are you and maybe I am too... todeloo!

greenthings Wim-Jaap
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Post by Panzilla »

Too much taste
Too much Waist.........



hmmmm there....

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I is de cat
I are red
I wear a hat
Upon my head.



Thankyo.
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Willst's am Ende
gar nicht lassen?

Does the Cat get the Sparrow ?
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Post by BraveAnimal »

Will the sparrow spare the hawk?

what is all this silly talk?
Not even words on paper, but pixels on light and glass.

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